20/20 VISION

II.

 

Marsh shedding velvety cattail fuzz

     Minute brown florets hipboot waders

          Pliant reeds bent on secreting

               ‘Til tomorrow brittle confidences snap

 

                    Fen mucky bog uprooted swampland

               Toothy leafs abscessed cavity refills

          Dense cluster gray pussy willows

     Droopy silk catkins close shave

 

Dr. Charles Frederickson (www.poeartry-combo.com)

& Saknarin Chinayote (www.poeartrygallery.th.gs)

Co-editors of AvantGardeTimes.com

 

 

Adapted Thai poEtpourri structural scheme

4-line 20-word write on stanzas

Per-verse offbeat reason sans rhyme

Un-author-ized style consciously punctuation free

 

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